Spring - By Ziva-Snow

Wow Ziva-Snow, you included some amazing adjectives and a simile in your work!

 

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  1. Ka pai Ziva-Snow. I can really imagine sitting under that tree and listening to the birds. Now I'm wondering if the bird has a plan and is gathering other birds for a reason?

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  2. Kia ora Ziva-Snow. Wow, what a fantastic piece of descriptive writing. My favourite part of this piece of writing is "blue shiny sky with clouds moving slowly around like a turtle."
    It's amazing what you notice when you stop and enjoy the nature around you. Keep up the great writing! Nikki

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