NEWS FROM AYESHA: Book Review
Hi Ayesha It looks like you are doing lots of work.
A quilt for Kiri
Kiri's grandma lived in another country far across the sea. She always sent
presents at christmas and on Kiri's birthday.. In her letters, she often wrote
the words of old songs. She wanted to teach these songs to Kiri, but she died before
she could come for a visit. Kiri's dad wanted to go to the funeral, but it was too far away.
Kiri had never seen him cry like that before. Kiri and her mum hugged him.
Room 20. Edit and proofread this piece of work from Ayesha below. GORGEOUS
Write down the whole piece of work and edit it as you go along. e.g. Remember full stops, capital letters, speech marks and paragraphs.
I think we might have a really hard time choosing Oh look! Rosie's messaged me back asking if we can come round at adout ten o'clock. Ooooh I don't Know Ava. What do you think? It's a bit early for saturday isn't it?" Muro laughed as Ava leaped out of bed flinging off the duvet. do you think we can then? We're to get lucy and Bell remember. And your do still asleep? We've only got two hors ! Avao squeaked. "Wake him up now Mum! And tell Lucy and Bel we'r going to see some kitten They'll be out of bed the fastest you've ever I promise! Hurry up Ava groaned. There's the house. Look number twenty - two Lucy you don't need to bring your toy cat we're going to see real kittens... They will like toy cats her sister said firmly. gathering up her toy cat and her handbag and all the cats clothes and clam bering down from her car seat. Lucy was only ust three Mum and Dad had said they'd think adout getting a family pet once she was old enough to understand that. Ava had been look forward to Luc birthday more than her a Ava's middle sister Bel had run on and was trying to undo the catch of the garden gate. PUT ON YOUR THINKING CAPS Lovely Room 20
Room 20. Edit and proofread this piece of work from Ayesha below. GORGEOUS
Write down the whole piece of work and edit it as you go along. e.g. Remember full stops, capital letters, speech marks and paragraphs.
I think we might have a really hard time choosing Oh look! Rosie's messaged me back asking if we can come round at adout ten o'clock. Ooooh I don't Know Ava. What do you think? It's a bit early for saturday isn't it?" Muro laughed as Ava leaped out of bed flinging off the duvet. do you think we can then? We're to get lucy and Bell remember. And your do still asleep? We've only got two hors ! Avao squeaked. "Wake him up now Mum! And tell Lucy and Bel we'r going to see some kitten They'll be out of bed the fastest you've ever I promise! Hurry up Ava groaned. There's the house. Look number twenty - two Lucy you don't need to bring your toy cat we're going to see real kittens... They will like toy cats her sister said firmly. gathering up her toy cat and her handbag and all the cats clothes and clam bering down from her car seat. Lucy was only ust three Mum and Dad had said they'd think adout getting a family pet once she was old enough to understand that. Ava had been look forward to Luc birthday more than her a Ava's middle sister Bel had run on and was trying to undo the catch of the garden gate. PUT ON YOUR THINKING CAPS Lovely Room 20WORD CHALLENGE
Every week I will post a word for you to use and make sure you follow the rules stated below. LOCKDOWN How many words can you find using only these letters?
RULES: Only letters from the original word can be used.
Letters cannot be used twice in a word unless twice in original word
Must be spelt correctly.
I tried it and found 10 words. Can you find more?
Letters cannot be used twice in a word unless twice in original word
Must be spelt correctly.
I tried it and found 10 words. Can you find more?
How many of these words can you put into a sentence.
Have fun and good luck!!.
Have fun and good luck!!.
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